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Note:

0000060 "My favourite story is called Gary Halliday & the Ray of Death and is 
	one of four books I enjoy reading about it"

The sentence is ungrammatical because of the resumptive pronoun but 
it's also inappropriate without it. The writer presumably meant that 
she enjoyed reading the book rather than reading *about* the book.


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