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0000290 Holidays -> Holidays'
0000720 holidays -> Holidays
0001700 personnel -> personal
0002080 comma deleted
0002310 agency's -> agencies
0002940 he -> the
0003880 pre booked -> pre-booked
0004230 agency's -> agencies
0004890 Booking -> booking
0005480 Agency -> agency


Notes:

0000080 "Dream Holidays is a holiday company, who supplies..."

	should be: ... a holiday company that supplies...


0000270 "The Dream Holiday's main objective as if of any other company is to
	make money."

	unclear construction, possibly: ..., as that of any other company, ...


0001460 "which will enable the company to store holiday destination and
	allow the information of a customer coming into the company to input
	their personal details and the holiday they would like to go on."

	the intended structure is unclear; means something like:
	... and allow the personal details of customers coming into the
	company and information on the holiday they would like to go on to
	be entered [into the electronic database]


0002610 "Facilities i.e. kitchen utilities, water conditions whether it is
	clean or not, telephone is on line and toilet facilities."

	informal abbreviated style, seems out of place.


0003550 "a negotiation is then taken place."

	should be: a negotiation then takes place


0003820 "A reservation is then completed and pre-booked blocks of rooms for
	an agreed timescale are made."

	meaning: ... blocks of rooms are booked for an agreed period of
	time.

